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2. Be of the opinion that

Ví dụ: I am strongly of the opinion that more public schools and hospitals should be built in this area.

Cách cải thiện: I (strongly) believe that more public schools and hospitals should be built in this area.

3. For the purpose of

Ví dụ: The government introduced the policy for the purpose of creating more jobs.

Cách cải thiện: The government introduced the policy (in order) to create more jobs.

4. It can be seen as a good idea

Ví dụ: It can be seen as a good idea for employees to share ideas frequently with each other.

Cách cải thiện: Employees should share ideas frequently with each other.

5. In a … manner/ way

Ví dụ: Employees in this company are required to work in a responsible manner.

Cách cải thiện: Employees in this company are required to work responsibly.

6. What I mean to say is that

Ví dụ: What I mean to say is that businesses should not harm the natural environment during their operations.

Cách cải thiện: Businesses should not harm the natural environment during their operations.

7. It can be easily seen/ It is clear from the graph that

Ví dụ: It can be easily seen from the graph that China will replace the USA as the world’s most powerful economy in less than 20 years.

Cách cải thiện: The graph shows that China will replace the USA as the world’s most powerful economy in less than 20 years.

8. Had the appearance of

Ví dụ: The business proposals had the appearance of having been neglected.

Cách cải thiện: The business proposals appeared to have been neglected.

9. By means of

Ví dụ: We travel by means of car.

Cách cải thiện: We travel by car. Thậm chí còn có cách tốt hơn là We drive.

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